Witches of the Pinspecked Void

pillars of creation deep zoom
a novel by Ran Prieur
I'm still plugging along writing more of this. Basically I'm writing fanfic in my own universe, and I don't know what's canon yet. Also, as I get better at writing, I notice flaws in this draft: clunky exposition, overexplaining, and the characters' voices are too similar.

Changes are appearing, for now, only in the complete html of Book 1. Change log: September 2022: renamed chains to strings, renamed Aqua to Myrma. January 2022: Changed Grimlock, formerly Ladbroke, to Spoke. October 2021: Thanans have been renamed Shinbones. April 2021: reverted merchant dialogue in chapter 5. October 2020: changed book one headquote. September 2020: rewrote Brother Dreadmuppet scene in book 2 chapter 12. December 2019: full rewrite of chapter 1. December 2019: new cover image. November 2019: reverted to old title. November, 2018: new chapter between chapters 12 and 13 of book two, and a new section in 2-14. Nov 15: added headquote to 2-15. Late October: new title. Oct 19: chapter 1-6 polishing. Oct 9: rewrote arbspace in 1-6. Sept 2018, stretched and rewrote 1-5 and 1-6.

Book 1: Pinspecked Void

complete html
frame and chapters

[other filetypes, still the September 2017 version]
rtf dictionary

Book 2: Tripsie Glade

[I recommend not reading this. A lot of it has been or will be changed.]

frame and chapters
complete html

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